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托福综合写作打造专属模板

信息来源:网络  发布时间:2015-06-26

  托福综合写作相对而言是比较简单的一部分,不需要我们构思写作思路,也不需要冥思苦想一些句子和单词。我们需要的就是讲阅读和听力中的观点,有机结合。因此,托福综合写作模版是大家都比较关注的,因为这些模板我们都可以运用到自己的托福写作中。可是怎么样才能提取自己的模版,做灵活使用熟记于心呢?前程百利小编今天就带领大家一起学习如何提取一份模版。

  首先我们先来看看OG的官方例子:

  OG作为ETS官方发布的考试资料,自然是要好好研究的,大家可以通过OG的范例,从中总结模版,修改润色后成为自己的:模版,在考试中灵活运用

  Writing Samples(粗体部分为可提取的模版)

  Writing Sample 1 (OG -- 284)

  The lecture completely refutes the passage. It is said in the lecture that, the perceived acts of altruism are nothing more than sneaky methods of gaining advantage for one's self. (听力观点,听力阅读之间的关系)

  Contrary to the belief in the passage that sentinels risk their lives for the cause of the whole group, the professor says that the meerkats sentinels are in fact less prone to threats. The alarm sentinels give off causes to group to move rashly which draw the predator's attention towards them, thus drawing away the attention from the sentinels. 阅读内容+听力驳斥)

  The lecture refutes the fact that these meerkats are altruistic in the sense that they gain nothing in exchange of their services. In fact, researches have shown that they have a full stomach as they perform this altruism duty and have a better chance of escaping from danger because they witness it first.(阅读内容+听力驳斥)

  Professor also offers a different underlying motivation that causes people to believe that acts such as donating an organ or sharing food with someone in need are altruistic. She says that people gain appreciation as a results of such acts, which may be deemed by some much more important than materialistic gains. (阅读内容+听力驳斥)

  Writing Sample 2 (OG -- 255)

  1、先认真读完一篇满分范文

  2、再用笔划掉其中涉及题目具体内容的部分

  3、最后把余下来的部分抄写下来即可

  再看一篇:

  Getting the Templates

  The first point the professor makes that casts doubt on the reading is his point about the behavior of stags. The professor shows how the actions of animal can be interpreted in different ways. For example, some people interpret the stag's actions as being for the "good of the species," but the professor shows that the stag is actually acting in self-interest. This casts doubt on the reading because it appears that the crickets' behavior can be interpreted as helping only individual crickets and not the group as a whole. The professor then talks about the results of the experiment, which seems to indicate the crickets are acting only in self-interest.

  Another point the professor makes that casts doubt on the reading is his point about the intelligence of animals and insects. As he states, it would seem to require a lot of intelligence to evaluate how a behavior will affect an entire species. This makes the explanation in the reading seem less likely; a cricket is probably unable to think of the consequences of its actions. It is more likely that the cricket is only acting out of self-preservation, as the professor indicates.

  提取的模版:

  The first point the professor makes that casts doubt on the reading is his point about _________.The professor shows that______.For example, ________, but the professor shows that_______.This casts doubt on the reading because it appears that________. The professor then talks about_________, which seems to indicate that________.

  Another point the professor makes that casts doubt on the reading is his point about _________.As he states, it would seem to_________. This makes the explanation in the reading seem less likely;______.It is more likely that_________, as the professor indicates.

  在我们提取模版之后,就要学会如何往里面进行填空,实际上教给大家一个最简单的方法,就是在看着题目把具体的内容自己填进去,然后去和相关的范文对比,这就是找出填空的精华技巧所在了!大家如果打算今后托福考试中作文部分可以有所突破,那么就可以按照前程百利小编教给大家的这个提取模版的方法,去至少提炼20篇左右的满分范文,再加以有机排列组合成自己独特的考试模版,最后进行集中填空,那么新托福综合写作高分不是神话。

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