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新托福写作真经4test16-独立写作解析

信息来源:运维  发布时间:2015-07-04

  托福真经1-4是目前市面上比较权威的托福写作的真题和测试题目集锦。新托福写作真经4是在前三本书的基础上,更加系统地归纳托福写作的常考题型。今天,前程百利小编和大分享的是托福独立写作的解析,希望大家能有所收获。

  题目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most of our problems will be solved in our generation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.你赞成还是反对下面的命题?我们的大多数问题将会在我们这代得到解决。请叙述具体的理由,并且举例支持自己的观点。

  第一部分:题目分析

  分类:社会类

  适用于本题目的万能理由

  1.诉求:面对社会中的一些现象,我们会有看法,当然也会有诉求

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  1.万能关键词句:crave for/long for/yearn for/pine for creatures of desire 欲望之物、meet our needs to one’s heart’s content 尽情享受、fulfill one’s dream satisfy one’s vanity满足虚荣心等。

  2.万能段落(可以运用到托福写作中,一定会给你的文章增色不少哦):Desire refers to our hope or inclination. We are all creatures of desires. We try our best/endeavor to satisfy our desire and vanity: the desire to relax to our heart’s content; the desire to gain more knowledge; the desire to earn big money and the desire to be loved. To meet one’s desire is to enjoy a happy life. Hence, we are all willing to sacrifice our time and efforts to make our heart’s desire fulfilled.

  2. 沟通 :沟通是人与人之间必不可少的环节,只要有接触就有沟通

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  1.万能关键词句:Interpersonal skills人际交往能力、disparate people各色人等、bare one’s heart 敞开心扉、exchange of ideas、transmission of messages、harmony of the relationship、communication can be heart-warming channels of 、communication are open

  2.万能段落:Communication is about the exchange of ideas, opinions and information through written or spoken words, symbols or actions. The smooth exchange of information and ideas between disparate people can be thrilling and heart-warming. When we bare our hearts to communicate, we can eliminate the conflict or contradiction. Thus, the distance among people will surely be shortened. Thus, we can achieve the purpose of transmission of messages. In the meanwhile, the interaction arises, which definitely improves teamwork. Hence, we can harvest (garner/reap) both the success of cooperation and the harmony of the relationship.

  第二部分:范文解析

  Each generation suffers from various problems, including environmental and social matters. How the people of a particular generation deal with the issues will have a great influence on the future, and people strive hard to achieve positive outcomes for the following generations. Some contend that our problems cannot be solved within our generation. However, I strongly believe these predicaments can be resolved soon. For one, rapidly improving technology will aid us in finding solutions. In addition, many organizations as well as individuals are trying their best to deal with the issues.

  First of all, the development of technology always accelerates the resolution of issues in diverse fields, including medicine and environmental sciences. Thus, new findings and studies have solved a number of problems. For instance, medical technology has found cures for patients in even the final stages of cancer. Moreover, architectural improvements and eco-friendly approaches in construction have resolved problems that used to cause pollution. Consequently, the means to improve different issues will clear up the trouble within our generation.

  On top of that, compared to the past, many organizations, corporations, and individuals are more conscious of various environmental and social issues. As a result, they are putting a lot of effort into healing the destruction. To illustrate, environmental organizations promote participation in green campaigns, and most people in Korea are actively involved in such exercises as recycling and using paper bags instead of plastic bags. This will eventually help nature recover to the level in the past when there was less environmental damage.

  It is true that results may not become apparent until later generations. However, the problems will be solved and will not continue in the next generations. The rapid progress of technology in various fields fosters the resolution of problems. Furthermore, a majority of people and groups have taken a step forward in working out the difficulties that we are going through. For the above reasons, I firmly agree with the statement that most of our problems will be solved in our generation.

  ◆思路分析:支持题目观点

  分论点1:First of all, the development of technology always accelerates the resolution of issues in diverse fields, including medicine and environmental sciences.

  首先,科技的发展加速各个领域的问题解决速度,包括药物和环境科学。

  分论点2:Compared to the past, many organizations, corporations, and individuals are more conscious of various environmental and social issues.

  和之前相比,组织和个人都对各样的环境和社会问题更有意识。

  闪光词汇整理:

  accelerate[ək'sɛləret]vt.· 使……加快;使……增速

  architectural[,ɑrkɪ'tɛktʃərəl]adj.· 建筑学的;建筑上的;符合建筑法的

  apparent[ə'pærənt]adj.· 显然的;表面上的

  素材积累(解决问题):

  素材一:Each generation suffers from various problems, including environmental and social matters. How the people of a particular generation deal with the issues will have a great influence on the future, and people strive hard to achieve positive outcomes for the following generations.

  每一代都面临各种各样的问题,包括环境和社会方面。每一代人解决问题的方式都会对将来带去影响,人们总是尽力去实现积极的影响,以便造福后代。

  素材二:The development of technology always accelerates the resolution of issues in diverse fields, including medicine and environmental sciences. Thus, new findings and studies have solved a number of problems.

  科技的发展加速各个领域的问题解决速度,包括药物和环境科学。这样一来,新发明和研究已经解决了很多问题。

  素材三:On top of that, compared to the past, many organizations, corporations, and individuals are more conscious of various environmental and social issues. As a result, they are putting a lot of effort into healing the destruction.

  和之前相比,组织和个人都对各样的环境和社会问题更有意识。因此,他们付出很多努力修复之前的破坏。

  以上就是前程百利小编从万能理由,托福范文的词汇以及素材解析等方面和大家分享的托福写作真经4test16独立写作部分的题目。因为小编将要解析托福写作真经4这本书籍。所以希望大家能够和前程百利小编一起攻克托福写作。

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