十天突破托福写作，最主要的还是掌握托福写作的整体水平，解决各个语法疏漏环节。让一流的思路和精美的论证共同完成一篇高分作文。那么如何在短期内完成这样一篇作文呢?十天突破托福写作的细节在那几个细节需要注意呢?
1. 用词不当
原：The absence of group work is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.
改：The absence of teamwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.
评：group work是“分组”或者“小组集体任务”的意思。这位同学原本想说teamwork“团队合作”，用了有些类似，但实际完全不同的词，在句中的含义就更加的不一样了。
原：You will be dangerous if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture.
改：You will be in danger if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture.
评：dangerous表示所修饰的对象是“带来危险的，有危险性的”，而be in danger才是“身处险境”的意思。到底谁才是威胁呢?
原：Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might affect their further development.
改：Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might affect their further development.
评：看似相同。这里想用动词affect表示“影响”，却误写为名词effect“效果”，相差太多啊!
2. 搭配错误
原：Nowadays, people are crazy pursuing to be excellent.
改：Nowadays, people are crazy about excellence.
评：这位同学显然记错了be crazy about sth. 这个用法，写出来的句子自然会出问题啦。
原：Besides, public speech can effectively increase your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career.
改：Besides, public speech can effectively improve your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career.
评：此处是一个明显的动宾搭配错误。“提高……技巧”应该是improve the skills，而不是increase the skills.
3.词性错位
原：I will forget my sad and pressure from the work and the study.
改：I will forget my sadness and pressure from work and study.
评：sad是形容词，而这里明显需要一个名词，应该是sadness。
原：Although making money is a priority for most people, spending time with the family is equal significant.
改：…, spending time with the family is equally significant.
评：形容词significant前需要用副词来修饰，所以equal应该改成equally。
4. 时态混乱
原：Although I have no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job.
改：Although I had no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job.
评：过去时的句子中冒出了现在时，同学你太粗心了，要仔细检查哦~
原：I would explain my view in the following paragraphs.
改：I’d like to explain… / I will explain…
评：可能是两种说法记混了吧，结果把时态搞错了……
综合以上前程百利小编整理的几点，我们不难看出，语法类的错误是托福作文中比较容易发生，也是比较容易被忽视的。十天突破托福写作当然不是指，在十天里就成功修成了托福写作的正果，十天这短短的时间，只能让你知道如何更好的晋级作文的优化。
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