托福写作结尾段并不仅仅起到总结前文的作用,还能够让考生利用最后的结尾段信息更好地展现自己的观点以及写作水平。因此,能够灵活、准确地运用结尾段是提高托福写作的一个关键点。接下来,前程百利小编和大家分享托福写作结尾段的写作方式。
1、领导式
托福作文的领导式结尾一般都是回顾主体段的观点,偶尔也会展望一下未来。比如Kaplan中关于“班级规模到底应该多大合适”的结尾段就是纯粹的领导式(但是请注意它没有照搬上文的词句,而是paraphrase和summary,这一点请需要考生特别注意一下):
Reducing class size is not just a matter of relieving(减轻)pressure. It will enhance what a student learns and even the person they learn it from can learn from this process. (“班级规模到底应该多大合适”的结尾段)两句话就结束全文,根本不给你反驳的机会。
再看一个例子:
In conclusion, university education should not be made free. I believe in that because the colleges need the money to make them better. If the universities are free, taxes will be raised and people will have to pay for things they might not use.
2、家长式
家长式结尾也同样带有较强的概括性,但是语气会比较缓以及贴合人意。家长式的结尾适合一边倒的结束语,也适合作折中式的结尾。不过需要注意的是,家长式也是有决策权的,不能完全让读者去自己选择。所以家长式结尾还是要有明显倾向性的,只不过是用比较容易接受的方式说出来而已。
比如下面这个Education类结尾:
For those reasons, we can safely conclude that classmates are too important a factor to ignore and they have more important influence than teachers on students' success at school.
3、愤青式
单纯从名称中就能够看出,这种写作方式中,作者是以一种自命清高的态度来写。但如果确实语言功底不错,而且确信能把自己不同流合污的价值取向表达清晰,用这种结尾倒真是相当不俗的。多给大家看个例子:
Needless to say, both sources are important to us. But in my opinion, knowledge from experience is even more important because without experience, it's almost impossible to understand knowledge from books or to understand how to apply this knowledge in real life.
这种结尾通常是先用Apparently, ../Clearly, .../Needless to say,…/It goes without saying that...等表达在结尾段首对辩论话题表示不屑,然后再用However,…/But.../Yet.../Nevertheless, ... / Still,…这类词汇引出一两句表明自己态度的结束语。
与家长式的“可正可反“不同,愤青式特别适合一边倒的高分作文结尾段。但注意写好它的关键并不是激动地发泄对社会的不满.而是有论证依据的、建立在充分说理基础上的表达改变现状的合理愿望。
以上就是前程百利小编为各位托福考生带来的托福写作结尾段的五种写作方式,小编将这几种方式,利用考生比较熟悉的称谓来提出,希望考生能够更加直观地了解和掌握这几种写作方式,从而更好地完成托福写作任务。需要更多托福考试信息和资讯,欢迎关注前程百利教育。
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