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浅析托福写作范文之部分肯定式结构

信息来源:运维  发布时间:2016-04-21

  托福写作的部分肯定式写作方法主要是针对含有极限词的题目。本文中的范文取自百利天下的学生,在韩老师的辅导下,他的托福写作取得了29分的好成绩。接下来,百利天下小编就和大家分享视频讲解中的重点内容,帮助大家更好地了解和运用部分肯定式的写作方法

  首先,介绍部分肯定式的写作方法

  针对题目中出现的极限词,我们应该去掉极限词。而去掉极限词的方法就是把“极限词”转换成其他的词汇或者是反对题目中出现的极限词部分。然后再根据反对的观点,列举2-3个反例进行论述。

  例如:Businessmen are motivated only by the desire of earning money.

  题目中含有极限词“only”,所以这时候如果从正面来写的话,会很困难,也是吃力不讨好。

  所以这时候就应该从反对的角度来写。

  其次,拓展文章的写作思路,搭建文章内容

  1)开头段

  ①以题目中的以statement中的关键词为核心做相关阐述

  ②自然过渡到statement

  ③表明立场一►开门见山

  ④预告文章论点/过渡句收尾

  托福写作的开头段一般就是按照上面的四个步骤进行,这里的第四个步骤,建议考生运用过渡句收尾,这样既可以引出下面的内容,又可以提出自己的观点。

  例如:When referring to the question of what motivates businessmen to do business, the majority of people may go for the answer of earning money, while others think differently. Admittedly, earning money is the initial motivation to push business people forward. We cannot deny that o great number of people do business for other purposes, which is also the same opinion of what I have always held in mind.

  2)中间段论述

  首先要提出分论点(specific reasons),然后是支持分论点的重分的例证支持(proper examples)

  例如:

  分论点1:It is true that earning money is the foremost thing that numerous businessmen would consider when they commence the business. In modern society, with money people almost can do everything. When people want to live in a certain place, they have to use money to rent an apartment. Besides, when they go out they have to pay for the food bill as well as the transportation cost.

  分论点2:On the contrary, if one does not have money, he may probably sleep on a cold long bench in the park on a chilly winter night and the only thing to keep him warm is the newspaper littered on the ground. What's worse, he might die from starvation. Therefore people need money, so do businessmen.

  3)结尾段

  They go to great lengths to earn money through numerous ways, all of which bring them a big fortune that could provide them with a better life. Due to all the things above, it is acceptable that businessmen do business to earn money.

  从这个考生的范文中,我们能够看出,学生并不是按照之前我们常说的写作方式。但是,学生做到了托福写作的三点内容:unity(一致性)、progression(渐进性)、coherence(连贯性)。因此,学生最后取得了29分的高分成绩。

  以上就是百利天下小编整理的韩老师课程中讲解的主要内容和基本的框架,希望考生能够从以上的内容中更好地认识部分肯定式写作方法的应用。欢迎观看视频内容了解更多详细信息。

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