托福独立写作要求考生要在30分钟内完成一篇表达个人观点的作文。字数应在300词以上。题目多为问考生是赞成还是反对某一观点，观点没有对错之分，只需要表明自己的观点，言之成理即可。题干很容易理解，学生作文一般要写4段或5段。如果是4段体，中间段落只需要论述两个分论点。
托福独立写作有很多考生得不了高分，是因为没有看到评分标准，其实，按照评分标准写，很难写不出好文章。接下来小编为大家详细介绍。
托福考试官方指南(OG)对托福独立写作在组织，展开论点和语言表达方面提出了考核标准。以一个学生的作文为例子来看看到底该怎么写。
题目来自独立写作机经：政府不该在经济上支持艺术家
Nowadays, the art is becoming more and more important in some developing countries, at the same time the modern art rapidly influence the whole world. On the contrary, i do not consider that the government should give the financial support to art.
Most of the art, such as the dance, play, concerts and so forth, can make a living by themselves since these are not free. On the other hand, if the government gives enough financial support the relevant actors and the editors will probably not to create the new formation and stimulate the whole field development because the funding of the government would break the normal economic rules and lead to the competition, which makes the most of the actors and editors diligent to create lose it own effect. Accordingly, without the financial support is the most benefit way to support the art developing.
第一论点讲财政支持会打破经济秩序，会使艺术很难像之前那样发展。
As the global number of the population is increasing, many social problems occur, like the matter of natural resource, the global starving. According that the government should investigate the protection of the endanger animals, the protection of the rainforest and searching the new resource for release the pressure of the atmosphere. For example the government can investigate some science projects for release the air pollution and the drain of the fossil resource. The hybrid automobile is a best example, since such vehicles can efficiently release the pressure from the trend of global warming and save more fossil fuel.
Furthermore, the government also can fund the education, building the new school and training the teachers. As we all know, the education is the most important part of the society. Letting more and more students to get the better educational resource is a essential thing for human developing, so the government funding will make more chances for the students and make the teacher receive more training time.
第二论点讲很多“社会问题”亟待解决，国家应该把经济支持用在更需要的地方。
In sum, the government should not to investigate the art since , the one facet, the art can develop by itself or even better than acquire the government support, on the other, there are some necessary problems need to be solved. As these problems i cannot agree with this assertion.
1.在“组织上”上OG提到了三个关键词“Unity统一性，Progression渐进性, Coherence连贯性”。
学生在连接词On the contrary，On the other hand，Accordingly, Furthermore等等使用不正确。所以大家一定要在写作之前准备好自己的表达框架和连接词。
渐进性问题：论点要层层递进，不要重复论述。
2.在“论点展开上”要求 “很好地展开论点、运用恰当清晰的解释、例证和细节”。
学生在第一个论点处，只是在用大量辞藻叙述某个问题确实存在，空洞，没有实质内容。
所以大家写作时要做到有理有据。
3.“语言运用上”要求作文的句子结构多样、措辞应贴切得体。
所以大家要时常积累自己的写作素材，经常练习写作。
以上就是小编带来的托福独立写作的高分策略，希望大家学习之后可以自己在写作时注意，拿到独立写作高分。预祝大家托福考试取得好成绩!
