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The following appeared in a memorandum from the director of research and development at Ready-to-Ware, a software engineering firm.
"The package of benefits and incentives that Ready-to-Ware offers to professional staff is too costly. Our quarterly profits have declined since the package was introduced two years ago, at the time of our incorporation. Moreover, the package had little positive effect, as we have had only marginal success in recruiting and training high-quality professional staff. To become more profitable again, Ready-to-Ware should, therefore, offer the reduced benefits package that was in place two years ago and use the savings to fund our current research and development initiatives."
Discuss how well reasoned ... etc.
逻辑错误分析:
1. 同时性因果关系
1)主题句:The causal relationship between benefit and package given to the professional staff and the decline of the profit is not guaranteed by the coincidence that the latter occurred just after the former. Other factors that may contribute to the decline in the profit should also be considered and ruled out.
2)论据:同时发生并不代表因果,忽略它因,比如题干中的incorporation?
2. 错误类比(纵向)
1)主题句:The statistics two years ago does not necessarily denote the future trend.
2)论据:两年前的状况不能推到现在。
段落间的连接:
两个逻辑错误
1. 同时性因果关系》效益和package一定有因果关系?
2. 错误类比(纵向)》两年前的状况和现在一样?
即使:
1. 即使效益的下降和引进package有关,那么两年前的事件也不能推到两年后的现在。
The following appeared as part of an article in the business section of a local newspaper:
"Hippocrene Plumbing Supply recently opened a wholesale outlet in the location once occupied by the Cumquat Cafe. Hippocrene has apparently been quite successful there because it is planning to open a large outlet in a nearby city. But the Cumquat Cafe, one year after moving to its new location, has seen its volume of business drop somewhat from the previous year's. Clearly, the former site was the better business location, and the Cumquat Cafe has made a mistake in moving to its new address."
Discuss how well reasoned ... etc.
逻辑错误分析:
1. 无理假设
1)主题句:It is absurd to say the Hippocrene has been quite successful in the original location of Cumquat Café Restaurant only because the former is planning to open a large outlet in a nearby city.
2)论据:新开直销店就一定证明是成功的?
2. 同时性因果关系
1)主题句:Other factors other than the location that may contribute to the success of the Hippocrene and the failure of Cumquat Café should be considered and ruled out.
2)论据:同时发生的AB两事物不一定就有因果关系:地理位置和成功与否。
段落间连接:
两个逻辑错误
1. 无理假设》新开直销店就证明成功
2. 因果关系》地理位置和成功与否不一定有因果关系。
即使
1. 即使新开直销店就意味着确实取得了成功,那么成功的原因也不一定就是因为地理位置,还有他因。。。更多相关内容请点击》GMAT写作备考侧重点分析。
The following is taken from an editorial in a local newspaper.
"Over the past decade, the price per pound of citrus fruit has increased substantially. Eleven years ago, Megamart charged 15 cents a pound for lemons, but today it commonly charges over a dollar a pound. In only one of these last 11 years was the weather unfavorable for growing citrus crops. Evidently, then, citrus growers have been responsible for the excessive increase in the price of citrus fruit, and strict pricing regulations are needed to prevent them from continuing to inflate prices."
Discuss how well reasoned ... etc.
逻辑错误分析:
1. 错误类比(个体推整体)
1)主题句:Lemon is unrepresentative citrus
2)论据:柠檬缺乏代表性,或者说柠檬有其特殊项,譬如柠檬都是进口的比较贵。
2.无理假设
1)主题句:The author commits a fallacy causal oversimplification that cold weather is responsible for the net revenues’ falling.
2)论据:天气好不一定代表物价要低,因为种植柑橘的农民已经动用了可用的资源了,产量无法再多了。
3.因果关系错误
1)主题句:Other factors other than growth that may contribute to the excessive increase in the price of citrus fruit should be considered and ruled out.
2)论据:忽略他因,是否只有一种因素导致价格上涨,不适合生长。。。。还有比如环境保护,加工价格上升,人力成本上升,或者单纯的物价上涨。
段落间的连接:
三个逻辑错误
1. 错误类比(个体推整体)》柠檬代表橘子
2. 无理假设》天气好价格就应该低
3. 因果关系错误》不一定是种植者哄抬物价
即使:
1. 即使。。。First and foremost…
2. second…
3. 即使本应该价格低的柠檬因为种植者肆意抬高物价,那么柠檬也不能代表整个橘子类。
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