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GRE写作Argument基本逻辑错误视频讲解(2)

信息来源:运维  发布时间:2016-04-23

  下面,百利天下小编为大家介绍的是GRE写作Argument基本逻辑错误视频讲解的内容,希望对大家写作有帮助。

  3. 攻击急于概括

  【攻击语言】there is no thorough lost-benefit analysis in the augment. If the increase of cost overweighs that of benefits…will fall in trouble of losing rather than gaining money. Also, the author neglects the fact of competition.

  【举例】The following is a letter from a professor at Xanadu College to the college's president.

  "The development of an extensive computer-based long-distance learning program will enhance the reputation of Xanadu College. This program would allow more students to enroll in our courses, thereby increasing our income from student tuition. Traditional courses could easily be adapted for distance learners, as was shown by the adaptation of two traditional courses for our distance learning trial project last year. Also, by using computer programs and taped lectures, faculty will have fewer classroom obligations and more time to engage in extensive research, thereby enhancing the reputation of Xanadu."

  4. 攻击非此即彼(二选一,忽略其他同类)

  【攻击语言】The author’s recommendation rests on the unlikely assumption that the company has only two alternatives----…and… In all likelihood… can engage one of many other… instead. Thus, to some extent the author recommends…over not just… but over any other… the recommendation is unwarranted.

  【举例】The following appeared in a memorandum from a dean at Omega University.

  "Fifteen years ago, Omega University implemented a new procedure that encouraged students to evaluate the teaching effectiveness of all their professors. Since that time, Omega professors have begun to assign higher grades in their classes, and overall student grade averages at Omega have risen by thirty percent. Potential employers apparently believe the grades at Omega are inflated; this would explain why Omega graduates have not been as successful at getting jobs as have graduates from nearby Alpha University. To enable its graduates to secure better jobs, Omega University should now terminate student evaluation of professors."

  5. 攻击言行不一致

  【攻击语言】The author appreciates who’s strong commitment to something to some extent. However, we know the fact that to make a commitment is one thing, to keep it is far more difficult. There is no indication that they might fulfill their promise. As a consequence,the author could not make any prediction.

  6. 因果关系

  (1) 因果关系简单化

  【攻击语言】This argument is unacceptable if there is no compelling evidence to support the connection between these two events.

  【举例】The following appeared in a memorandum from a vice president of the Megamart department store chain.

  "For the third year in a row, the average household income in our country has risen significantly. That prosperity means that families are likely to be spending more time and money on leisure activities. Megamart stores should therefore concentrate on enlarging and promoting its line of products typically used in leisure activities: athletic and outdoor equipment, televisions, gourmet cooking equipment, and luggage and travel accessories."

  (2) 相关性不代表因果关系

  【举例】The article entitled 'Eating Iron' in last month's issue of Eating for Health reported that a recent study found a correlation between high levels of iron in the diet and an increased risk of heart disease. Further, it is well established that there is a link between large amounts of red meat in the diet and heart disease, and red meat is high in iron. On the basis of the study and the well-established link between red meat and heart disease, we can conclude that the correlation between high iron levels and heart disease, then, is most probably a function of the correlation between red meat and heart disease.

  (3) 先后关系不同于因果关系

  【举例】The following appeared as a letter to the editor of a local Solano newspaper.

  "The Solano school district should do away with its music education programs. After all, music programs are not especially popular in our schools: Only 20 percent of our high school students participated in music programs last year. Furthermore, very few of the Solano district‘s college-bound students are interested in majoring in music at the university level. Also, when the school district of our neighboring town of Rutherford eliminated its music programs two years ago, the overall grade point average in the high school increased by 10 percent the next year. Surely the money spent on Solano music programs could be better used to improve the quality of traditional academic courses."

  (4) 同时发生的事件不是因果关系

  【举例】The following is from an editorial in the Midvale Observer, a local newspaper.

  "Ever since the 1950's, when television sets began to appear in the average home, the rate of crimes committed by teenagers in the country of Alta has steadily increased. This increase in teenage crime parallels the increase in violence shown on television. According to several national studies, even very young children who watch a great number of television shows featuring violent scenes display more violent behavior within their home environment than do children who do not watch violent shows. Furthermore, in a survey conducted by the Observer, over 90 percent of the respondents were parents who indicated that prime-time television--programs that are shown between 7 p.m. and 9 p.m.---should show less violence. Therefore, in order to lower the rate of teenage crime in Alta, television viewers should demand that television programmers reduce the amount of violence shown during prime time."

  7. 无理假设

  【举例】The following appeared in a letter from the owner of the Sunnyside Towers apartment complex to its manager.

  "One month ago, all the showerheads in the first three buildings of the Sunnyside Towers complex were modified to restrict maximum water flow to one-third of what it used to be. Although actual readings of water usage before and after the adjustment are not yet available, the change will obviously result in a considerable savings for Sunnyside Corporation, since the corporation must pay for water each month. Except for a few complaints about low water pressure, no problems with showers have been reported since the adjustment. Clearly, modifying showerheads to restrict water flow throughout all twelve buildings in the Sunnyside Towers complex will increase our profits further."

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