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雅思作文之成为好的社会成员是家长的责任还是学校的责任?

信息来源:运维  发布时间:2015-06-19

  雅思大作文中题材多样,针对不同题材,考生要有正确的解决策略。今天,前程百利小编为大家带来的是雅思作文之成为好的社会成员是家长的责任还是学校的责任?你的观点是什么呢?一起来了解一下吧。

  雅思作文题目:

  You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

  Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

  Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.(剑8 test1 task2)

  Write at least 250 words.

  范文:

  A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only, has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.

  In order to be a good member of any society,the individual must respect and obey the rules of their community and share their values. Educating children to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and is widely through to be the responsibility of parents. They will certainly be the first to help children learn what is important in life, how they are expected to be have and what role they will play in their world.

  However, learning to understand and share the values system of a whole society cannot be achieved just in the home. Once a child goes to school, they are entering a wider community where teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home. At school, children will experience working and living with people from a whole variety of background from the wider society. This experience should teach them how to operate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community.

  But to be a valuable member of any community is not like learning a simple skill. It is something that an individual goes on learning throughout life and it is the responsibility of every member of a society to take responsibility for helping the younger generation to become active and able members of that society.

  一、话题类型:

  教育类

  二、题目类型:

  讨论类

  三、题目简要内容:

  A方-家长应该教育孩子怎样成为社会的良好一员;

  B方-学校是孩子学习如何成为社会好成员的地方

  四、素材积累:

  1) It is +形容词to do sth.

  the responsibility of… …的责任,义务

  2) 表达观点时,否定句和肯定句的交叉运用:

  第一段:

  第一句否定句(...has never been about...)

  第二句肯定句(…has always included...)

  第三句否定句(...cannot be...)。

  结尾段:第一句否定句(...is not like...)

  第二句肯定句(...is something that...)

  3) 根据题目要求,考生在论述时不能只提出自己的观点,而是要先把对立双方的观点进行分析,之后再提出自己的观点。

  写作时,考生首先要了解的是成为好的社会成员的标准是什么,怎样才能成为好的社会成员。然后指出家庭,学校两方面对于孩子成为好的社会成员的影响。

  五、论据积累:

  本文运用解释说明的方法进行论证,明确了要成为好的社会成员所需要学习的内容:遵守规则,尊敬他人,明确生活目的,学习行为方式等等。

  六、结构分析:

  第一段:

  第一段引出话题,并提出观点。

  A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only, has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.

  本段通过一正一反的角度,指出孩子教育不仅是学习和获得知识与技能,还包括教育他们如何融人社会成为社会的合格成员。而要想成为社会成员,那么不能局限于家庭,光靠家长来教育。

  the responsibility of… …的责任,义务

  第二段:

  第二段论述的是家长在教育孩子成为好的社会成员方面所扮演的角色。

  In order to be a good member of any society,the individual must respect and obey the rules of their community and share their values. Educating children to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and is widely through to be the responsibility of parents. They will certainly be the first to help children learn what is important in life, how they are expected to be have and what role they will play in their world.

  in order to 为了

  begin in 始于

  第一段末尾指出教育孩子成为好的社会成员不仅是家长的职责,因此在本段叙述的时候,需要先说明家长为什么要承担责任教育孩子融人社会。

  本段首先是指出社会成员的标准,为了要达到这一标准必须从小开始。而孩子从小就是先和父母在一起生活,是从父母那学习如何成为好的社会成员。

  第三段:

  第三段是论述学校在教育孩子融入社会方面所扮演的角色。

  1) 首句通过转折词however指出,帮助孩子融入社会并共享社会价值观念不仅是家长的责任:However, learning to understand and share the values system of a whole society cannot be achieved just in the home. (本句起到了承上启下的作用,从上一段的家长过渡到此段的学校。)

  achieve 取得,获得,实现

  2) 孩子进入学校之后,老师和同学会带来甚至比父母给的还要多的影响。Once a child goes to school, they are entering a wider community where teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home.

  as much…as 差不多,尽...那样多

  3) 孩子在学校里会与来自不同背景下的人们一起工作和学习。这样的经历会教会他们怎样合作与为社会做出贡献。At school, children will experience working and living with people from a whole variety of background from the wider society. This experience should teach them how to operate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community.

  experience v. 经历;体验到

  a whole variety of 各种各样的

  contribute to 有助于,贡献

  结尾段:

  But to be a valuable member of any community is not like learning a simple skill. It is something that an individual goes on learning throughout life and it is the responsibility of every member of a society to take responsibility for helping the younger generation to become active and able members of that society.

  go on doing 继续做某事

  take responsibility for 对...负责

  结尾段指出成为有价值的社会成员不仅仅像是学习简单技能那样。这一过程会贯穿一个人的一生。结尾段不是仅在家庭与学校两点上展开论述,帮助孩子融入社会不仅是家长和学校的职责,也是每个人的责任。

  参考译文:

  孩子的教育从来都不仅仅是学习信息和基本技能。它一直都包含一项内容:教育下一代人如何成为好的社会成员。因此,这不应该仅仅是家长的责任。

  为了成为好的社会成员,个体必须尊重和遵守社会规则,共享社会的价值观念。教育孩子了解遵守规则和尊敬他人的必要性总是从家里开始的,而且人们普遍认为这是家长的责任。家长当然是最早让孩子知道生活中什么是重要的,教他们应该如何行事,告诉他们在他们的世界里要扮演什么样的角色的人。

  但是,学习理解和共享全社会的价值体系的过程不可能只在家里就能完成。一旦孩子上学以后,他们就进入了一个更广阔的社会,在那里老师和同学的影响会和父母在家里的影响一样大。孩子们在学校里会和来自更广阔的社会,有着完全不同背景的人们一起做事和生活。这一经历应该教会他们怎样彼此合作,以及如何为团体生活做贡献。

  但是,学习成为任何团体中有价值的一员都和学习简单技能不一样。成为有价值社会成员是个人在一生中需要不断学习的,每个社会成员都有责任帮助年轻一代成为积极能干的社会成员。

  以上就是雅思作文之成为好的社会成员是家长的责任还是学校的责任的详细内容,考生要学习其中之精华,并学以致用。祝大家考出满意雅思成绩,更多雅思备考经验我们将会陆续为大家更新,前程百利雅思考试频道不可错过!欢迎咨询我们的热线电话400-890-6000。

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