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雅思地图题之岛屿旅游设施建成前后的对比

信息来源:运维  发布时间:2015-06-29

  雅思小作文中,地图题与流程图较为特殊,考生要给予充分的重视,学会分析图中信息,并合理组织文章结构才会赢得高分。今天,前程百利小编带来的是雅思地图题之岛屿旅游设施建成前后的对比,一起来学习一下吧。

  雅思作文题目:

  You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

  The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

  Write at least 150 words.(剑9 test1 task1 )

  范文:

  The two maps show the same island while first one is before and the second one is after the construction for tourism.

  Looking first at the one before construction, we can see a huge island with a beach in the west. The total length of the island is approximately 250 metres.

  Moving on to the second map, we can see that there are lots of buildings on the island. There are two areas of accommodation. One is in the west near the beach while the other one is in the centre of the island. Between them, there is a restaurant in the north and a central reception block, which is surrounded by a vehicle track. This track also goes down to the pier where people can go sailing in the south sea of the island. Furthermore, tourists can swim near the beach in the west. A footpath connecting the western accommodation units also leads to beach.

  Overall, comparing the two maps, there are significant changes after this development. Not only lots of facilities are built on the island, but also the sea is used for activities. The new island has become a good place for tourism.

  一、题目类型:

  地图题-2个图

  二、题目简要内容:

  一个小岛旅游设施建成前后的对比

  三、素材积累:

  central reception block 中央接待区

  western accommodation units 西部居住单元

  pier 码头

  连接词:

  while, and, also, furthermore, overall, not only...but also...

  指示代词和替换表达:

  the same; the first one; the second one;

  the one before construction;

  the second map; one...the other one; them; which; this track; where;

  四、论据积累:

  无论是雅思小作文中的哪种题型,考生要根据图中所给信息来进行描述,不要凭空捏造,那样只会画蛇添足,影响分数。

  五、结构分析:

  整体分析:

  通过地图,我们可以看到本图没有拆毁岛上原有的部分,而有增加了一些变化,即岛屿中部和西部有两处可以住宿的度假屋子,环形围绕,人们可以通过人行道由西部的度假屋通往海滩。此外,在两个度假屋中间坐落着餐馆和接待处,人们可以通过行车道通向岛屿南面的码头,在码头附近还有帆船可供出海航行。

  文章可划分为四段:

  第一段改写题目指出两幅图的主要内容;

  第二段和第三段分别描写旅游设施建设之前和之后的变化情况;

  第四段总结两幅地图的主要差异。

  具体分析:

  首段:

  首段改写题目并介绍了地图的基本信息:

  The two maps show the same island while first one is before and the second one is after the construction for tourism.

  该句较为简单的介绍,但是句中存在语法错误,即while是表示对比关系,first表示序数词,前面应加the,因此,此句应改为The two maps show the same island and while the first one is before, the second one is after the construction for tourism.

  第二段:

  第二段简单的描述了图一,指出岛屿西部有一个巨大的沙滩以及岛屿的总长度。

  Looking first at the one before construction, we can see a huge island with a beach in the west. The total length of the island is approximately 250 metres.

  但是描述的过于简单化,考生可以添加一些其他的内容进去,使描述更充分,比如从图中我们也可以看到岛屿东西方有一些小树林。

  approximately 大约,近似

  第三段:

  第三段描述旅游设施建设后岛屿的变化:即新增住宿区、餐馆、接待处、码头,帆船等。

  第一句话为总的概述:Moving on to the second map, we can see that there are lots of buildings on the island.

  接下来就是具体描述新增的东西都有哪些:(1)住宿区There are two areas of accommodation. One is in the west near the beach while the other one is in the centre of the island. (2)餐馆以及接待处Between them, there is a restaurant in the north and a central reception block, which is surrounded by a vehicle track. (3)码头This track also goes down to the pier where people can go sailing in the south sea of the island. Furthermore, tourists can swim near the beach in the west. A footpath connecting the western accommodation units also leads to beach.

  accommodation 住处,膳宿

  pier 码头

  go sailing 去航海,去航行

  footpath 人行道

  句中of 应改为to,表示毗邻关系

  结尾段:

  结尾段首先指出旅游业建设前后岛屿发生的变化,然后指出不仅在岛屿内有变化,海上也被充分利用起来。

  Overall, comparing the two maps, there are significant changes after this development. Not only lots of facilities are built on the island, but also the sea is used for activities. The new island has become a good place for tourism.

  加粗句中有语法错误,not only为否定放在句首时,要使用倒装形式,因此,本句应改为:Not only are lots of facilities built on the island, but also the sea is used for activities.

  参考译文:

  这两幅图显示的是同一座岛屿。图一和图二分别显示了该岛在旅游业建设之前和之后的情形。

  首先看建设之前的这张图,我们可以看到一个巨大的岛屿,西面有海滩。岛的总长度大约为250米。

  现在来看第二幅图,我们可以看到岛上有很多建筑物。有两个住宿区。一个在靠近海滩的西部,另一个在岛屿中部。在两个住宿区之间,北部是家餐厅,中央是机动车道围绕着的接待处。车道还一直通往码头,人们可以在岛屿南面的海中扬帆航行。此外,游客可以在西面的海滩附近游泳。一条连接着西部住宿群的人行道也通往海滩。

  总之,比较两幅图可以发现这次开发后有较大变化。不仅岛上建造了很多设施,而且海洋也被用于活动。新岛屿已经成了旅游的好地方。

  以上就是雅思地图题之岛屿旅游设施建成前后的对比的详细内容,考生如果不知道如何分析地图,如何进行文章的布局,一定要多花时间去弄懂优秀范文,多阅读一些好的文章,学会去分析其写作思路以及文章框架等等,对自己的写作一定会有很大的帮助。希望考生能够取得一个满意雅思成绩,更多雅思备考经验我们将会陆续为大家更新,前程百利雅思考试频道不可错过!欢迎咨询我们的热线电话400-890-6000。

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