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雅思小作文之混合图范文分析

信息来源:网络  发布时间:2015-07-15

  备考雅思小作文考试,考生要掌握其中每一种题型的解题技巧并加以练习,一定会有所突破。此外,优秀范文的学习也会对写作带来一定的帮助。下面,就和前程百利小编一起来看看雅思小作文之混合图范文分析,小编相信,只要你用心学,提高分数没有问题。

  以该题为例:

  The graph ant table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

  本题目是剑桥雅思官方指南Test 2中的小作文,通过题目分析,我们可以得知该题为混合图,图一为线图,横轴表示月份,纵轴表示月平均气温,三种不同颜色的线代表三个不同的城市, 即黄色代表伦敦。紫色代表纽约,红色代表悉尼。纽约和伦敦的曲线变化非常相似,年初和年末的温度较低,年中的温度最高。而悉尼的温度曲线则成相反的趋势变化,年初和年末的温度较高,年中的温度较低。

  图二为表格,描述的是三个城市的年平均日照时间。纽约和悉尼的时长较接近,伦敦的日照时间相对而言较短。

  因此,考生在描述的时候把主体段落分为两段,分别描述图一和图二。

  另外,考生在描写混合图的时候,尤其是有数值体现的图,考生要学会分析,提取有效信息,并用具体数值进行支撑。这样写出来的作文才会有理有据,不至于空洞。

  下面,我们就来看一下各个段落到底是如何布局的吧,每个段落里面又有哪些知识点可供我们学习呢!

  小编先给考生朋友们奉上优秀范文一篇:

  The data provides information on average temperatures and annual hours of sunshine in London, New York and Sydney.

  The temperature patterns for London and New York is similar, although New York has warmer summers and colder winters. In both cities, peaks occur in July/August, at 23° in London and 29° in New York. In contrast, Sydney's hottest weather is in December/January when temperatures average 25°. During this period, New York's temperature dip to an average of around 5°, compared with 8° in London. On the other hand, Sydney's lowest average temperatures in July are just over 15°.

  As far as hours of sunshine are concerned, New York and Sydney have similar average of 2,535 and 2,473 hours respectively. London, however, has a much lower average of 1,180 hours.

  Clearly, London is the coldest city and has the fewest hours of sunshine. New York has the hottest summers, but Sydney enjoys the warmest overall climate.

  接下来,我们来具体分析:

  首先是第一段:

  通过改写题目来交代本题的核心内容。

  The data provides information on average temperatures and annual hours of sunshine in London, New York and Sydney.

  本句中the graph and table show被替换成the data provides information on; the average number of hours of sunshine per year 被替换成 annual hours of sunshine。

  在小作文写作时,同义替换表达可是能够为整体分数增色不少呢,因此,考生在平时复习的过程中要多多积累并学会适当使用,这样才会有所成效。

  其次是第二段:

  第二段描述图一的内容,先是描述变化曲线很相似的两个城市,即伦敦和纽约,比较二者之间的异同。随后,与悉尼进行对比。

  The temperature patterns for London and New York is similar, although New York has warmer summers and colder winters(此句意味着悉尼冬夏温差较大). In both cities, peaks occur in July/August, at 23° in London and 29° in New York. In contrast, Sydney's hottest weather is in December/January when temperatures average 25°. During this period, New York's temperature dip to an average of around 5°, compared with 8° in London. On the other hand, Sydney's lowest average temperatures in July are just over 15°.

  In both cities 指出伦敦与纽约的相同之处

  peaks occur in… 在...出现峰值/最高点

  In contrast 指出二者与悉尼的对比差异

  dip to下降,下沉

  接下来是第三段:

  第三段描述图二信息。先描述数值相近的城市纽约和悉尼的日照时长,然后描写日照最少的伦敦的数值。

  As far as hours of sunshine are concerned, New York and Sydney have similar average of 2,535 and 2,473 hours respectively. London, however, has a much lower average of 1,180 hours.

  As far as…are concerned… 就...而言

  最后是结尾段:

  结尾段给出总结概括,指出三个城市各自最明显的特征。

  Clearly, London is the coldest city and has the fewest hours of sunshine. New York has the hottest summers, but Sydney enjoys the warmest overall climate.

  以上就是雅思小作文之混合图范文分析的详细介绍,考生要充分利用范文,吸取其中精华之处并为之所用,才会有事半功倍的效果。希望考生朋友们考出满意的雅思成绩,更多雅思备考经验我们将会陆续为大家更新,欢迎咨询我们的热线电话400-890-6000。

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