英文中用词冗余的常见表达是wordiness，句子中如果混乱的插入了不必要的词汇，并没有起到对句子有效连接的作用的词汇，一些改进句子中的常见问题是包含的单词和短语重复了已经描述的或者暗示过的意思。因此也可以寻找那些从句可以多段为修饰短语，短语可以简化为单词的句子。例如下面的句子：
例：.During the months of July and August last summer, I had a wonderful summervacation.
因为July 和August表达了夏天中的月份的意思，所以是重复的，直接可以删减为：
Last July and August I had a wonderful vacation.
Wordiness的含义相信大家都了解了，也都知道如何改正了，用词冗余并不局限于重复还有词汇表达上的罗嗦等等，下面我们通过SAT语法中的真题来进行练习和巩固一下吧。
11. Friends of Dreiser reported that he was fired from his first job for the reason that his news stories were sympathetic always for the poor.
(A)for the reason that his news stories were sympathetic always for the poor
(B)since his news stories for the poor that were always sympathetic
(C)because his sympathy to the poor was always in his news stories
(D)the fact being that his news stories were always sympathetic about the poor
(E)because his news stories were always sympathetic to the poor
句意：据Dreiser的朋友们说他第一份工作被解雇的原因是他的新闻故事总是在向穷人表示同情。
解析：E，A中的for the reason that可以缩减成一个词because，B中since从句中没有谓语动词，C中sympathy后买不用to,D中the fact being that直接用because替代。
考点：用词冗余，句子成分。
关于用词冗余的问题经常在语法中是常考的内容，语法是属于写作中的一部分，考察的就是大家书面用于的表达能力，句子不能罗嗦不整洁，所以能够做好语法的解答也是对SAT写作的一种促进，所以各位考生一定要重视起来哦。
以上就是小编为大家整理的关于SAT语法改进句子中用词冗余的问题，除了小编上面的对用词冗余问题的分析，后面还会陆续为大家贡献更多的备考策略，大家快来关注前程百利SAT考试吧。
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