在前面也和大家介绍过托福写作低分的一个原因就是写作过于繁琐复杂，简词繁用的现象严重。那如何让文章更简化呢，接下来小编就为大家分享两个托福写作精简诀窍，希望对你备考有帮助。
诀窍一：避免空洞的单词和词组
1. 在托福写作中，一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子：
When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.
这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。
改为：Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
2. 替换空洞和繁琐的表达方式。例如：
Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.
诀窍二：避免单一词汇
1. 在托福写作中，尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然托福词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子：
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.
large 对一个farm来说就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改为：
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
更简洁的表达方式为：My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
2. 有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换。例如：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.
这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly，显得更为简洁：
My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.
考生在做托福写作的时候，要注意文章不能过于冗长啰嗦，句子结构过于繁复的文章往往出现语病，这对托福写作取得高分也是相当不利的。因此，考生一定要让自己的文章简洁精练，希望以上的建议对大家的托福写作成绩有所帮助。您还可拨打百利天下咨询热线400-890-6000，获取更多最新留学考试资讯。
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