托福口语中有一类话题就是运动，要求我们描述一个运动项目。下面前程百利托福小编就拿具体的某道托福口语中的朋友类话题题目给大家在思路上进行拓展，并结合学生的回答给予分析。
题目：Talk about a game, sport or other group activity that is played in your country. Explain why you think the activity is enjoyable. Use specific details and examples in your response.
题目中的第一个关键词是“game, sport, group activity”，团体类运动或游戏主要有：
Basketball
Football
Volleyball
Table tennis
Hide-and-seek
题目中的第二个关键词是“enjoyable”， Enjoyable在这里可以解释为：
Thrilling
Exciting
Fast
Establish friendships
Team spirit
Strategic
Relax
针对这道题目，我们来看一下某个学生的回答，指出这个回答中的几项错误和需要改善的地方。
Basketball is one group activity ① and it is played in my country with high frequency among people, ② no matter their age, status or gender. Numerous people play basketball to ③ relaxation and get exercise. There is at least one basketball court situated in ④ communities in my country, and people ranging from adults to children go to play regularly. After a long day’s work, many ⑤ people who work in the offices choose to play basketball to momentarily get rid of their ⑥ tired work. For kids, running around and chasing the one with the ball is quite exciting.
通过分析，这个回答存在以下问题(对应的问题已在回答中标出)：
①句式过于简单：“and it is”句式过于简单;
②语法错误：“no matter”后面不单独接名词短语，表示“不管、不顾”之意，往往后面接“what”，“when”，“where”等;
③语法错误：此处“to”后面需要接动词，同时“and”表示并列结构，其后面为“get”，所以，“relaxation”前面也需要动词;
④语义不明：该处笔者的意思是(每个)社区里都会有至少一个篮球场，但是“communities”的表达却不恰当;
⑤表达过于简单：可以用更有难度的短语替代“people who work in the offices”;
⑥语法错误：“tired”的意思是“感到累的”，不是“累人的”。
针对这些问题，可以做出以下批改建议：
Basketball is one group activity ① that it played in my country with high frequency among people, ② regardless of their age, status or gender. Numerous people play basketball to ③ seek and get exercise. There is at least one basketball court situated in ④ each community in my country, and people ranging from adults to children go to play regularly. After a long day’s work, many ⑤ while collars choose to play basketball to momentarily get rid of their ⑥ taxing work. For kids, running around and chasing the one with the ball is quite exciting.
① “that is”定语从句的使用提高了句子的层次;
②“regardless of”后面可以接名词或名词短语，翻译成“不管、不顾”;
③加上“seek”这个单词就没有语法错误了，翻译成“寻求放松”;
④用“each community”意思就更加明确了;
⑤“white collars”准确地表达了原来“people who work in the office”的意思，更加的简洁;
⑥ “累人的”可以使用“taxing”这个单词。
通过以上的讲解，相信大家对托福口语运动类话题有了更深入的了解。大家在平时要多看一些范文，搜集一些思路，还要注意尽量避免语法上的错误，使用丰富的词汇和句式，这样才能在托福考试中拿到口语高分。
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