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托福独立口语解析之你对朋友的建议

信息来源:运维  发布时间:2015-09-07

  自从改革开放以来,社会竞争的压力增大,对于每年毕业的学生而言,毕业季也是失业季,如果你的朋友准备开始找工作了,你会给他什么建议呢?如果这则题目出现在托福口语 考试中,你又会怎样组织答案呢?现在就跟着前程百利小编一起来看看这则托福独立口语解析吧!希望可以帮助大家在考试中取得好成绩!

  What suggestions would you give to a friend who is starting a new job?Give example and details in your response.

  一.思路解析

  找工作意味着要进入职场了,开始一份新的工作就要学着适应新的环境,认识新的同事,学习新的技能。首先适应新的环境意味着我们要调整自己,学校和职场毕竟是不一样的,离开了老师和同学们的帮助,你总要自己学会很多事情;第二是认识新的同事,要学会友善的对待别人;第三是学习新的技能,要谦虚好问。

  我们的思路可以如下图所示:

  开始新工作-适应新环境,认识新同事,学习新技能etc.

  适应新环境-调整自己

  认识新同事—友善

  学习新技能-谦虚好问

  二.范文

  If my friend is starting a new job, I would give him/her two suggestions as follows.

  First of all, he/she should always say hello to the person he/she meets. People always like those who are polite and kind to the others, so a simple word like hello can make others accept and remember him/her, and in return, being kind to my friend. In this way, he/she could makes friends quickly.

  Moreover, he/she could be modest. When stepping into a new environment, there's definitely plenty of new things remained to be learned. Thus, I think my friend should be modest enough to ask questions and learn from others, which enables him/her to learn more efficiently and handle his/her job as soon as possible.

  三.重点词汇

  1. suggestion:n. 建议;示意

  The dietitian was helpful, making suggestions as to how I could improve my diet.

  2. polite:adj. 有礼貌的,客气的;

  Everyone around him was trying to be polite, but you could tell they were all bored.

  3. moreover:adv. 而且;此外

  She saw that there was indeed a man immediately behind her. Moreover, he was observing her strangely.

  4. modest:adj. 谦虚的,谦逊的;

  He's modest, as well as being a great player.

  5.step:vi. 踏,踩;走

  I took a step toward him.

  6.definitely:adv. 清楚地,当然;明确地,肯定地

  I'm definitely going to get in touch with these people.

  7. efficiently:adv. 有效地;效率高地

  "It is going to meet it with proven technology that will cover more of Europe, including Poland, and it will do it more efficiently than the previous system could have or did."

  四.重点句式

  1. If my friend is starting a new job, I would give him/her two suggestions as follows.

  If引起了条件状语从句,would+动词原形,as follows adv. 如下

  在文章的首句表明了如果自己的朋友开始了一项新的工作,自己会给她两个建议。希望大家在考试的时候也可以这样组织语言,不要让考官去猜测自己的答案。

  2. First of all, he/she should always say hello to the person he/she meets.

  First of all首先,he/she meets作为定语修饰the person。首先,她应该和每个她见到的人打招呼。这句话是第一个论点。运用衔接词,条理更加清楚明确。

  3. People always like those who are polite and kind to the others, so a simple word like hello can make others accept and remember him/her, and in return, being kind to my friend.

  who引起了定语从句,修饰those。be kind to sb,对某人友好。so连接了两个完整的句子。这个句子中的主干是a simple word can make others accept and remember him/her,like hello做插入成分。人们会喜欢那些有礼貌并且和别人友好的人。所以一个简单的单词比如你好,可以让大家理解并接受他。这样的结果,对于我的朋友是有利的。

  4. Moreover, he/she could be modest.

  Moreover衔接词,此外,希望大家在备考中多多的积累一些衔接词,此外,他应当诚实。这是第二个论点。

  5. When stepping into a new environment, there's definitely plenty of new things remained to be learned.

  When引起了时间状语从句,省略了主语和谓语动词,当我的朋友进入了一个新的环境,there be句型表示存在,plenty of 大量,那里有很多的新鲜事物需要他去学习。

  6. Thus, I think my friend should be modest enough to ask questions and learn from others, which enables him/her to learn more efficiently and handle his/her job as soon as possible.

  Thus因此,I think之后是一个宾语从句,learn from向…学习是固定搭配,which引起了非限制性定语从句,enable sb. to do sth让某人做…..我希望我的朋友可以足够诚实去问问题和向别人学习,这样可以让他们学习的更加有效并且尽可能快的熟悉自己的工作。

  以上就是前程百利小编要和大家分享的托福独立口语解析,希望可以帮助大家备考。如果想了解更多备考资料,欢迎登陆前程百利论坛,最后预祝每一位考生都能考出好成绩。

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