受汉语思维的影响,考生在托福写作考试中经常会写出一些不符合英语语法的句子。下面小编为大家列举托福写作常见语法错误并提出改进的方法,大家一起来看一下吧。
一、一个简单句中出现两个谓语动词
很多考生在写作时只是根据中文的思维和感觉写,对干英文中一个简单句只能有一个谓语动词的规则不够敏感,容易在一个简单句中出现两个或两个以上的谓语动词,这是明显违反语法的。在there be句型中特别容易出现两个谓语动词的错误。考生应当记住:一个简单句只 能有一个谓语动词,当出现两个谓语动词时,要将其中一个转化成恰当的非谓语形式或从句的谓语。请看下面的例子。
例:There are so many people compete for a position.
评析:“there be”句型中的“be”动词本身就是这个句子的谓语动词,后面不能再出现谓语动词。这时,可以将后面的动词转化为非谓语动动词的形式,或者转化成从句的谓语动词。
更正1:There are so many people competing for a position.
更正2:There are so many people who compete for a position.
二、从句独立成句
从句必须依附于主句而存在,单独一个连词引导的从句不能用句点和主句隔开而独立成句。
例:It is helpful for children to make mistakes and learn from their own mistakes. Because making mistakes sometimes is the best way to avoid more mistakes and to cultivate valuable aspects of characters.
评析:“Because”引导的原因状语从句不能单独成句,必须依附于主句而存在。可以把两句话连成一句,或是把原因状语从句改为以“it is because”或“this is because”开头的句子。
更正1:It is helpful for children to make mistakes and learn from their own mistakes because making mistakes sometimes is the best way to avoid more mistakes and to cultivate valuable aspects of character.
更正2:It is helpful for children to make mistakes and learn from their own mistakes. This is because making mistakes sometimes is the best way to avoid more mistakes and to cultivate valuable aspects of character.
三、词性误用
考生在记单词的时候容易只记单词的意思,不注意词性和用法,导致名词、动词、形容词、副词之间词性误用的情况。这样的错误比较严重,应该避免。
例:He works industrious all day.
评析:句中的“industrious”是形容词,不能修饰动词。形容词用于修饰名词,副词可以修饰动词、形容词和副词。
更正:He works industriously all day.
四、代词错误
代词方面的错误主要是代词与其所指代的名词单复数不一致。
例:As a person, sooner or later, they will meet some problems.
评析:句中的“they”作为复数代词与其所指代的名词“person”单复数不一致,此处应用单数形式的代词。
更正:As a person, sooner or later, he or she will meet some problems.
五、介词后面跟动词原形
介词后面不能跟动词原形,必须跟名词或动名词。
例:People splash water on each other for celebrate their new year.
评析:介词 “for”后面不能跟动词原形“celebrate”,可以改为动名词形式。
更正:People splash water on each other for celebrating their new year.
以上就是小编为大家列举的托福写作常见语法错误,希望考生能够有所启发。最后,小编祝愿各位考生在托福考试中取得好成绩!
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