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托福独立写作人物类话题实例解析

信息来源:运维  发布时间:2016-06-25

  在托福独立写作中,大概有十类话题,每一类话题都是按照题目中的主要关键字进行划分,这样的话,更便于考生找到每一类话题的解题思路和方法。人物类是其中的一类话题,人物类话题主要是指以人物为主语,围绕着人物的特点、性格、特质或者是人物的一些事情。本文和大家分享托福独立写作人物类话题实例解析,用真题题目和大家分享解题方法。

  例题:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by the society in the past than they are nowadays. 同意与否:和现在相比,老师在过去更受尊敬,更有自身价值。

  这道题目的主语是老师,老师在人物类话题中出现的频率特别高。首先注意到,这是一道对比类的题目,是针对老师这个角色进行今昔对比。首先,针对今昔对比这样一个话题,我们可以从社会背景下细化写作思路,例如:科技类、经济、教育、交通等生活的各个方面。不过,在这里要结合托福写作的关键词“教师”,应该从教育的相关方面来看。

  下面我们来细化一下,到底从哪些方面来说,教师的角色不再像之前那样受人尊敬和神圣:

  1)随着网络的发展,学生获取知识的途径多了,从而减少教师的重要性;

  2)教育的商业化趋势,使得学生对教师的尊重变少;

  3)现在对教师职位的要求降低,使得很多老师并不符合教师这个角色。

  接下来,从以上三点内容出发,来看一下这篇文章的主要内容和框架:

  第一部分(开头段):交代并引出话题,从而便于提出本文的观点。

  As contemporary, students are more casual and the relationship between teachers and students get worse. As for me, the view that teachers are less respected.

  第二部分(中间段):从以上三点内容出发,分别作为中间段每一个段落的分论点。

  分论点1:First and foremost, with the rapid boom of internet, students have much more choices in obtaining knowledge due to extent decreases the importance of the position of teachers. In other words, it is because of the internet information that students do not have to ask their teachers for help as what they always did ……随着网络的发展,学生获取知识的途径多了,从而减少教师的重要性

  分论点2:Moreover, the commercialization of education has to be blamed for the abatement in the respect from students for teachers. It is because the education nowadays is so commercially exaggerated that …… 教育的商业化趋势,使得学生对教师的尊重变少;

  分论点3:Finally, lower requirement for being a teacher should take teacher as long as he is covered up by the media. In contrast to the past, our authority is doing a worse job in estimating the many people fill a post without real qualifications. 现在对教师职位的要求降低,使得很多老师并不符合教师这个角色。

  第三部分(结尾段):总结中间段的内容,重申文章观点。

  In conclusion, even though teachers play the increasingly free acquisition of knowledge and the room for doubt those teachers are destined to be decreasingly respected.

  以上就是百利天下小编梳理的托福独立写作人物类话题实例解析。在拿到一道题目的时候,审题是必不可少的步骤。此外,写作思路的拓展和文章结构搭建也是考生要特别注意的部分。

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